Instead of, "Learning to ride a bike without training wheels was hard", Emerson said, "Crash! Bang! Smash! I tumbled into the basketball hoop. "Ugh!" I groaned. This was the tenth time I crashed today."
Instead of, "The roller coaster was scary", Abby says, "But if I knew how horrible it would be, I would have started kicking and screaming to get out and live. As we started up the slope, I heard the ticking. Tick, tick, tick, tick. It was counting down to the time I died."
Instead of, "I was scared on the ride", Rory writes, "'Ahhh!' Everyone screamed on the ride. Everyone except for me. I had my eyes sealed shut and was as quiet as a mouse that can squeak. I felt my mother's warm hand and knew I was safe."
"We slowly crept up the stairs. No one was supposed to be home but us. We looked around. Nothing. I looked over at the tv. Off. Everything was in its place. Everything. I looked at Nathan and Nathan looked at me. Everything was in its place but one thing." - Aidan
"The cart was amazing. It was blue, a beautiful light blue, with flames. It was the inside that scared me. No harness. No safety. Nothing. And I was in the front." - Emma
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