More excerpts:
Before: I hurt myself on a rock at the beach.
After: I went to go get the frisbee, but I tripped and fell on a pointy rock that looked like a tiny cliff. My right knee sunk into the point and at first, I didn't really feel anything but a few seconds later, it felt like a giant nail and a chisel had been hammered really hard right under my right knee. It hurt like crazy! I could see the blood soaking into the sand. - Bradley P.
Before: I fell off my bike. It hurt.
After: My sister and friends, Ian and Annalise, were biking around Chataqua and there was a big hill near the auditorium. Lindsay and Annalise were in the auditorium and Ian was gliding down the hill. 'I bet I can do that,' I thought to myself, but boy, was I wrong! - Abby
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